{"id":330,"date":"2022-08-07T16:36:50","date_gmt":"2022-08-07T16:36:50","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/williamayejones.com\/?p=330"},"modified":"2025-12-28T17:04:50","modified_gmt":"2025-12-28T17:04:50","slug":"how-to-revise-your-novel","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/williamayejones.com\/it\/how-to-revise-your-novel\/","title":{"rendered":"Williamaye Jones recommends four books that teach you how to revise your novel"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>While drafting your novel is a monumental task, revising your novel is an even more daunting prospect and one that often takes longer to do than the writing itself. And that\u2019s as it should be. But while on my writing journey, I found four books that teach you how to revise your novel.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>One question you may be asking yourself is why should I revise my work when I can just hire someone to do that? And the answer is simple: Only you truly know your novel backwards and forwards, and revision is much like a conversation you have with your novel. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-pullquote has-vivid-purple-color has-text-color\"><blockquote><p>\u201cThere is a saying: Genius is perseverance. While genius does not consist entirely of editing, without editing it\u2019s pretty useless.\u201d<\/p><cite>\u2014Susan Bell, <em>The Artful Edit: On the Practice of Editing Yourself<\/em><\/cite><\/blockquote><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>As you read your work, questions may come up. Instantly, you\u2019re brain may more easily supply that answer than an editor who\u2019s looking at your work for the first time, puzzling out what you&#8217;re saying when you wrote <em>that<\/em> <em>particular<\/em> <em>phrase<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Additionally, an editor is there to cut out the chaff. In fact, they are not there to rewrite your words. They are only there to finetune them. Undoubtedly, editors will always be needed. As Bell states: when you learn to revise your novel, an editor\u2019s job \u201cwill be less an act of excavation than one of refinement.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Ready to revise your novel?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Many of my revisions were inspired by my amazing critique group\u2014thank you, ladies!!! And the feedback they offered me month after month. Other revisions came from information gleaned from numerous writing&nbsp;workshops, conferences, and residencies&nbsp;I attended, as well as from the four amazing books I present to you here. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And, yes, much like you, I am still learning and growing my craft. These four recommendations will strengthen your work and make it the best it can possibly be\u2014your readers and your novel(s) deserve it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>1. Use your intuition to revise your novel<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-columns is-layout-flex wp-container-core-columns-is-layout-9d6595d7 wp-block-columns-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:66.66%\">\n<p>Yes, you can create a tight, polished, publishable novel and it starts with intuition\u2014that instinctive feeling that all writers have and need to learn how to tap in to instead of conscious reasoning. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And Tiffany Yates Martin\u2019s book, <em><a href=\"https:\/\/amzn.to\/3BHOIdi\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Intuitive Editing: A Creative and Practical Guide to Revising Your Writing<\/a><\/em>, will help you get there. Tiffany is a developmental book editor who\u2019s worked with <em>New York Times<\/em>\u2019 best-selling authors. So this gal knows her stuff.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And, it doesn\u2019t matter if this is your first novel or your one-hundredth novel, Tiffany provides inspiration, motivation, and confidence to help you discover the best version or your story. <\/p>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:33.33%\">\n<figure class=\"wp-block-embed is-type-rich is-provider-amazon wp-block-embed-amazon\"><div class=\"wp-block-embed__wrapper\">\n<div class=\"media-embedded\"><iframe loading=\"lazy\" title=\"Intuitive Editing: A Creative and Practical Guide to Revising Your Writing\" type=\"text\/html\" width=\"2000\" height=\"550\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen style=\"max-width:100%\" src=\"https:\/\/read.amazon.com\/kp\/card?preview=inline&#038;linkCode=kpd&#038;ref_=k4w_oembed_gELnBo59VygiC6&#038;asin=B084WZVL9N&#038;tag=kpembed-20\"><\/iframe><\/div>\n<\/div><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>I love this idea of developing the \u201ceditor brain.\u201d Just like you learn how to write, you learn how to edit, and that\u2019s what this book offers.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The super plus? There are no rules in this book, much like writing it allows your creativity to flow. She asks probing questions to make you think deeply about your novel.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The book is divided into four parts: macroedits, microedits, line edits, and getting feedback. I love how she goes from <strong>big picture<\/strong> items\u2014like plot\u2014down to smaller items, like tension and showing and telling.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>She teaches you how to request and process feedback, how to be objective and analyze your work like an editor not as the writer who bleeds with every word poured onto the page. She\u2019ll show you how to find the problems and then how to fix them.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-text-color has-vivid-purple-color has-alpha-channel-opacity has-vivid-purple-background-color has-background\"\/>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-group\"><div class=\"wp-block-group__inner-container is-layout-flow wp-block-group-is-layout-flow\">\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading has-text-align-center\"><strong>Free Bookmark<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\">The 5 big picture items you need to focus on to revise your novel.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-buttons is-content-justification-center is-layout-flex wp-container-core-buttons-is-layout-16018d1d wp-block-buttons-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-button\"><a class=\"wp-block-button__link has-vivid-purple-background-color has-background wp-element-button\" href=\"https:\/\/mailchi.mp\/bfb556017b77\/big-picture-changes\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">GIVE IT TO ME<\/a><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-text-color has-vivid-purple-color has-alpha-channel-opacity has-vivid-purple-background-color has-background\"\/>\n\n\n\n<div style=\"height:50px\" aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-spacer\"><\/div>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>2. Your manuscript makeover<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-columns is-layout-flex wp-container-core-columns-is-layout-9d6595d7 wp-block-columns-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:100%\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-columns is-layout-flex wp-container-core-columns-is-layout-9d6595d7 wp-block-columns-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:66.66%\">\n<p>I simply adore Elizabeth Lyon\u2019s book, <em><a href=\"https:\/\/amzn.to\/3vJuzj6\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener sponsored\">Manuscript Makeover: Revision Techniques No Fiction Writer Can Afford to Ignore<\/a><\/em>. As an independent book editor myself, I recognize the genius of another book editor who has been at this craft much longer than me. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And, yes, even as an editor, I would not edit my own novel when it\u2019s time to do so. I shall hire a professional and hope Elizabeth or someone equally brilliant will be there for me. As Elizabeth often says: \u201cAll writing needs revision.\u201d<\/p>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:33.33%\">\n<figure class=\"wp-block-embed is-type-rich is-provider-amazon wp-block-embed-amazon\"><div class=\"wp-block-embed__wrapper\">\n<div class=\"media-embedded\"><iframe loading=\"lazy\" title=\"Manuscript Makeover: Revision Techniques No Fiction Writer Can Afford to Ignore\" type=\"text\/html\" width=\"2000\" height=\"550\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen style=\"max-width:100%\" src=\"https:\/\/read.amazon.com\/kp\/card?preview=inline&#038;linkCode=sl1&#038;ref_=k4w_oembed_8OEJVeJ7INiGiK&#038;asin=B0015DWK2C&#038;tag=wjonesstore-20\"><\/iframe><\/div>\n<\/div><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>This book is divided into four parts. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>What I love about these parts is that you can read what you need and get to work. Part one concentrates on style, which she terms the \u201cvoice of style.\u201d Now we can quibble over voice or style, two words that are often interchangeable, just know that this section concentrates on finetuning your uniqueness.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The next part concentrates on craft\u2014strengthening beginnings and endings, pacing for maximum suspense, and increasing the stakes. Part three concentrates on characterization\u2014rewriting for dimensionality, universal need, and theme. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And the final part concentrates on marketing, because even after you\u2019ve revised your novel, you\u2019re not done\u2014you need to get it out into the world. This section has its own copyediting checklist as well as examples and tips for writing the dreaded <a href=\"https:\/\/www.lionesspress.us\/blog\/four-query-letter-essentials\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">query letter<\/a> and synopsis.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>3. Use a roadmap to revise your novel<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-columns is-layout-flex wp-container-core-columns-is-layout-9d6595d7 wp-block-columns-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:100%\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-columns is-layout-flex wp-container-core-columns-is-layout-9d6595d7 wp-block-columns-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:66.66%\">\n<p><em><a href=\"https:\/\/amzn.to\/3Q2D7cV\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener sponsored\">Save the Cat! Writes a Novel: The Last Book on Novel Writing You\u2019ll Ever Need<\/a><\/em> by Jessica Brody. The title sums it up so succinctly that I need not say anything else, but of course I shall. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Indeed, I love this book because it doesn\u2019t matter if you\u2019re a plotter of a pantser. Whether you have an inkling of an idea or a fully drafted novel. This book gives you great tools for making your novel the best it can be.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>What&#8217;s more, at the end of each chapter, Jessica asks questions to check your work; questions that will make you get to the heart of your story. <\/p>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:33.33%\">\n<figure class=\"wp-block-embed is-type-rich is-provider-amazon wp-block-embed-amazon\"><div class=\"wp-block-embed__wrapper\">\n<div class=\"media-embedded\"><iframe loading=\"lazy\" title=\"Save the Cat! Writes a Novel: The Last Book On Novel Writing You&#039;ll Ever Need\" type=\"text\/html\" width=\"2000\" height=\"550\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen style=\"max-width:100%\" src=\"https:\/\/read.amazon.com\/kp\/card?preview=inline&#038;linkCode=sl1&#038;ref_=k4w_oembed_x4fGuEB3BKkM4l&#038;asin=B078VWDNKT&#038;tag=wjonesstore-20\"><\/iframe><\/div>\n<\/div><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>Answering these questions will let you know whether you\u2019re on the right track or whether there is still work to do. Each chapter builds from the last chapter, much like a roadmap taking you from <em>a<\/em> to <em>b<\/em> to <em>c<\/em>, and by book\u2019s end if you followed along and completed the tasks she gives you, you\u2019ll have a saleable, read-worthy novel to either try for <a href=\"https:\/\/www.lionesspress.us\/blog\/self-publishing-or-traditional-publishing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">traditional publishing or self-publishing<\/a>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>4. Your last draft<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Sandra Scofield is an amazing teacher (and author) who I first learned about from a writing mentor who recommended Scofield\u2019s 2007 <em><a href=\"https:\/\/amzn.to\/3QvxvIl\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">The Scene Book: A Primer for the Fiction Writer<\/a><\/em>, where Sandra teaches you about beats in a scene\u2014absolutely brilliant. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-columns is-layout-flex wp-container-core-columns-is-layout-9d6595d7 wp-block-columns-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:66.66%\">\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/amzn.to\/3vLUabo\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\"><em>The Last Draft: A Novelist\u2019s Guide to Revision<\/em> <\/a>is her follow-up to <em>Scene<\/em>, published in 2017. Without a doubt, it is just as brilliant. It takes you step by step through your novel and offering a world of encouragement to get you to <em>the end<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And, as the title states, this book is for novelists who\u2019ve drafted their novel and look to revise it. Think: Sandra is to you much like Homer is to <a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Dante_Alighieri\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener nofollow\">Dante<\/a>, your guide through the fiery depths of your novel. (Yeah, I couldn\u2019t resist, remember <a href=\"https:\/\/williamayejones.com\/it\/musingonitaly-welcome\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">my world<\/a> is Renaissance Italy.)<\/p>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:33.33%\">\n<figure class=\"wp-block-embed is-type-rich is-provider-amazon wp-block-embed-amazon\"><div class=\"wp-block-embed__wrapper\">\n<div class=\"media-embedded\"><iframe loading=\"lazy\" title=\"The Last Draft: A Novelist&#039;s Guide to Revision\" type=\"text\/html\" width=\"2000\" height=\"550\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen style=\"max-width:100%\" src=\"https:\/\/read.amazon.com\/kp\/card?preview=inline&#038;linkCode=sl1&#038;ref_=k4w_oembed_OuaTdjnfvPkOqs&#038;asin=B06XVVYW4T&#038;tag=wjonesstore-20\"><\/iframe><\/div>\n<\/div><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>Also, with Sandra, you\u2019ll learn how to take things apart and put them back together stronger and deeper. She explains literary concepts\u2014character agency, narrative structure\u2014all writers should know and master, and provides examples to learn from. She is the friendly mentor on your shoulder who helps you break down your novel into four stages:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>A Close Look<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>The Plan<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>The Process<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>The Polish<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>An additional bonus to the book is its wonderful resource section with other recommendations to hone your craft, a scene template, sample scenarios, and lessons from other novels.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>These four book recommendations will help you on your journey to becoming the novelist you are meant to be as they continue to help me. 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